Escape From Goshen
A reimagining of the Old Testament for Young Readers

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8 lilith
Location: haifa
IP: 132.74.34.29

Wednesday Jul 20 2011 17:59:53 UTC
I think Avishai was wrong about the mud in the Nile. I thought there were sticks at the bottom of the Nile that dug up mud, and that's why the river was so muddy. **)
7 lilith
Location: haifa
IP: 132.74.34.29

Wednesday Jul 20 2011 17:52:40 UTC
I think that Leah was sure Moshe was going to free the Israelites from the Egyptians. **)
6 lilith
Location: haifa
IP: 132.74.34.29

Wednesday Jul 20 2011 17:50:09 UTC
I think the rainbow was real, because God wanted the Israelites to go into Israel. **)
5 Micaela
Location: My computer
IP: 75.33.53.34

Sunday Jul 17 2011 17:33:15 UTC
Bonnie,

Great job! I think that you should change the name to Land of Goshen; I think it attracts readers and gives a broader interpretation of the story. My favorite character was Jamila. Although she lost her son, she did not act like her husband toward Jacob and Leah's family, blaming them immediately. The cats are great, also. :]
4 Martina
Location: Shaker Heights
IP: 75.33.53.34

Sunday Jul 17 2011 17:28:01 UTC
Bonnie,

I loved the story; it was great! I had great time reading the story. My favorite part of the story was when they started dancing at the end. **) **)
3 Emilia
Location: Shaker Heights
IP: 75.33.53.34

Sunday Jul 17 2011 17:22:19 UTC
it was a nice story and i like the idea of making a series.i think you should keep the name as slaves of goshen instead of the land of goshen,but it is your choice.my favorite character is Accacallis because she sings, which reminds me of you. ;-)
2 Francisca
Location: Shaker Heights
IP: 75.33.53.34

Sunday Jul 17 2011 17:07:39 UTC
Had the pleasure of finishing the book today!! It was a nice look into the Exodus story from a child's view and gave the kids and me an opportunity to speak about this and other Bible stories. Regarding the rainbow, I like Dovid's focus on the miracle of faith, regardless of whether the rainbow was a vision of God or not.

Great job Bonnie!!! Thanks!!! 8-D
1 Bonnie Gordon
http://exodus4youngreaders.com
Location: Shaker Hts., OH
IP: 95.90.206.166

Wednesday Jul 13 2011 13:02:09 UTC
Hello everybody! Thanks for stopping by and letting me know what you think. I'm so looking forward to hearing from you!